I really like this. The intro sets a good tone for the clip, the character is adorable (and the splash when it falls is a fun effect!), and my goodness those backgrounds, and the part with the character walking on the counter top is visually fascinating. Great job with the angle work and all that. I think the audio probably could have used a little more attention, even though the sound effects were fine I thought maybe a little background music or something to that effect could have gone a long way.
The story is conceptually pretty fun, although I think it could have been made bit more interesting with some more conflict or something to that nature. The only issue our little water-y friend encounters here is falling off of the table, which is very quickly worked around.
So overall, a little more work on the sound and story and I wouldn't hesitate to give something like this a full 5 stars. I think this piece is quite good for what it is, and I'm really hoping to see more from you going forward! Nice work :)
Thanks for the tips!
I love this art style, it's really fantastic, and the animation is so fluid, it's beautiful. This is really awesome work. -1/2 because eggs are bad tho.
(Rated 5 :) )
If there were sausages instead would you reconsider? Just kiddin, thank you for the kind feedback! There's much more to come!
Not bad, fairly funny, I especially liked the sound effect and the way you drew the face when the character puts the sax to its face. I think over all, there were some pretty strange choices in the audio here, like why did the track get quieter for the speech and then get louder again? I feel like it would have better just to make the speech louder than the music. I also would have liked to see more going on here, I get the minimalistic approach, but some kind of background or something, anything really, could have helped here.
- 1/2 Star because Epic Sax Guy is an old meme.
+ 1/2 Star because Epic Sax Guy is a great meme.
Nice, I like the style here, I think the background is especially well done. :) Also you did a good job with the poses, the characters are anything but stiff in a way that really makes this image come to life. Good work!
Excellent illustrations! :) Very good work
Thank you. :)
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