Nice work, all the "experiments" turned out really well in this. I especially like the zooms, and the intro was fantastic. I do get the sense that I wish this was longer, but I'm not complaining either. Good job all around!
Nice work, all the "experiments" turned out really well in this. I especially like the zooms, and the intro was fantastic. I do get the sense that I wish this was longer, but I'm not complaining either. Good job all around!
Great feedback, thanks :-)
Nice work! Your animation style is pretty fun. Respect for the Wilhelm Scream :)
Thanks!
Incredible stuff, as always. Your art style never ceases to amaze me :) Keep up the good work, you're the kind of artist that keeps me coming back to NG. Much love!
Thank you it really means a lot. All but the best man.
Genuine perfection from beginning to end. I LOVE the backgrounds, and the little jokes in the beginning as he's looking through the windows, and that Grinch smile was spot on. The joke where Rob is tasting the cookies and guessing Paul stole them is well delivered, and on that note, all of the jokes have excellent timing. In particular, the G-Rated Naughty Tracker. That's god damn hilarious. You've really outdone yourself with this one, my dude. Congrats on making a masterpiece.
If I have one complaint, it's that the ending shouldn't have been the damn ending. I wanted more! Like the ending was good and hilarious, I just wish it was longer! (Don't get me wrong though, I know how much work you put into this, it's not like making it a whole lot longer was gonna be a super realistic goal).
Fantastic work.
Wow thank you for the detailed review. I agree with the ending. I will consider some.extra footage for any future shorts. The bear trap does have lots of plans for the future! Thank you so much cheers!
Good stuff! Lots of really subtle humour going on here behind all the main jokes (the lighter exploding when being thrown on the ground, for instance, such a specific thing that could easily be missed if ya blinked!) which is awesome! If I were to offer some constructive criticism, I would say first that the pacing is a bit quick, particularly on the written parts. I heard somewhere once that you should always give enough time for the text to be read aloud three times, and that stuck with me. Another thing is that I wish you had done voice acting for this! I would have loved to hear Paul explaining all these steps as it went along. Anyway, I loved it, I think it turned out really great. Nice work :)
Thanks a million yo! We'll thought out review and every piece of suggestion I agree on entirely. Definitely consider these next time we make a "how to vid" appreciate the critism more than anything! Cheers
Love it. The animation style is sweet, the joke is hilarious, and I especially like the way you did the voices. Cool stuff
thanks alot man, always appreciate the support.
Love it! My favourite part is probably the first one with the Magic School Bus. I do think it probably should have come later in the short, but it is really well done. I like all the humour in this, I actually yelled out "No!" during the part with Pikachu lol :) I really enjoyed all the sound design and voice acting (although I do think your Shaggy could use some work haha). Nice character design (the prince's blue tongue was a nice touch), good animation all around.
Great work :)
Thank you for your review. We will make sure that each of our VOs gets the same amount of attention next time!
I love every second of this. The humour is great, the sound effects superb, and I can smell the neighbour-on-neighbour love from here.
Incredible stuff :)
thank you neighbor! ;)
The differences between this piece and that scene from the original Shrek film are very subtle. In fact, for some time while watching this I was certain that I was in fact watching that scene the original Shrek film, but nay, I was instead watching a fan animation based around that scene in the original Shrek film.
As always, the editing in this makes my blood feel good. It's exactly what it needs to be.
Really like the mixing of mediums.
Only complaint is Shrek's voice was pretty hard to understand throughout the whole thing, maybe some subtitles would have helped, and also offered potential for jokes.
Good work <3
Love you Bubbo!!!!
So I loved every bit of the first episode. The art style is absolutely amazing, and the bizarre nature of all of it is exactly the kind of thing I love. Then, when you took me to Montreal in this episode, I was just in awe. If this wasn't already perfect for me, it ended up somewhere I used to live. The cross on mont royal, the olympic stadium, the museum of fine arts, all places I've personally been to and have a real connection with. Never had that happen in anything I've watched before. This is some really awesome stuff, I can't wait to see where this is going. Please keep up the great work, and good luck!
Cheers man, happy you liked it. :)
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